english the finale

I’m In English we have to chose one of the four essays that we haven’t finish and was to perfect and make a final copy. I pick my I Know Graduating In 2011. The reason I pick this essay because it really reflects how I feel about school and what kind of person I am. It also as many details and I feel as though it’s of my best one. To grade myself I probably give me self a 3 all together. I have a strong introduction, details, voice, and sentences. What I think I need most improvement on vocabulary, and transitions. Well blow you can find my essay hopefully you feel as though I give my self the right grade. Comments would be nice!!!